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Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway.
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Corner John

by ganymeder – about 1 month ago

Once in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway. She was hoping to catch a cool breeze as well as a paying customer as the slinky dress billowed behind her. Cigarettes were sexy again, and with lung disease the least of her worries, she i...   [Read more...]

2 remarks  ||  1 favorite  ||  146 views

Could it be?

by Anglea – 8 months ago

Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway.

My lost daughter. Well, actually that isn't who she was, but as soon as I first saw her I convinced myself it was. I always do.

So far there had been sixty five possibilities.

Jo...   [Read more...]

3 remarks  ||  1 favorite  ||  756 views

Bonded to the Middle Kingdom

by GeoffreyFarris – 11 months ago

Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway. She leaned on the door frame, getting support from the wood that she no longer got from her feat. The binding had just begun and already she has trouble balancing herself....   [Read more...]

1 remark  ||  0 favorites  ||  96 views

Where?

by tony_mcfadden – over 2 years ago

Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway.

Twice, in Singapore, she sat by a fountain.

Three times, in Kuala Lumpur, at three different locations, she waited by Banyan trees.

She was waiting. Always waiting.

She was waiting...   [Read more...]

1 remark  ||  0 favorites  ||  125 views

Once

by meghanb8 – over 2 years ago

Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway. Once, in Bucharest, a old man in a red scarf lost his way on a familiar street. Once, in Brooklyn, a young boy in red shoes ran home from school as fast as he could. Today, in a red coat, I fo...   [Read more...]

2 remarks  ||  0 favorites  ||  120 views

Business

by ganymeder – over 2 years ago

Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway. She hugged her shoulders and shivered in the form fitting dress. Too little cloth and too much cold collaborated to goose-pimple her flesh.

The man on the bed behind her called her back. S...   [Read more...]

1 remark  ||  1 favorite  ||  183 views

Gōng Zhǔ

by dijeratic – over 2 years ago

Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway.

Passersby ignored the frail, shivering thing, their eyes never dropping, their heads never turning. She might have been a doll in a window, or something someone left behind. Sh...   [Read more...]

1 remark  ||  2 favorites  ||  845 views

Angel In Red

by HeatherGwrites – over 2 years ago

Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway. The boy standing across the street couldn't help but notice her. He thought she looked a little curious as to what he was doing just standing on the other side of the street.

He totall...   [Read more...]

1 remark  ||  0 favorites  ||  139 views

All Mother Wants...

by HeatherGwrites – over 2 years ago

Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway. She was looking at her mother, who cried silently.

This young girl wasn't sure why her mother cried, and she was afraid to find out. The last time she found her mother in an emotio...   [Read more...]

0 remarks  ||  0 favorites  ||  99 views

Delicious Chinese Delicacy

by LaineWinters – over 2 years ago

A wolf was hunting her, for she was young and precious and delicious. She didn't remember her name, she had been running for so long; so, when she got up and went into the doorway, she was surprised at first. There was a picture of her on...   [Read more...]

1 remark  ||  0 favorites  ||  137 views