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It was the fall that surprised me most.
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September 28, 2010
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Wimp

by Saturnascends – 29 days ago

I would have otherwise been absolutely fine. Everything was going according to plan. We were doing it. Oh, it was bliss.

Never would I have thought that events would turn the way they did. Oh it began with just a simple slip. The gravel underneath my feet beg...   [Read more...]

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Catch me, I'm falling for you!

by Jayden Nicole – 6 months ago

It was the fall that surprised me the most. I mean, I knew from the first time I looked into his bright blue eyes that I loved him but after a few more meetings, I realized that I was falling in love. I guess I had always thought that it w...   [Read more...]

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Herion, my friend.

by emma – 9 months ago

It was the fall that surprised me most. I was on the floor writhing, banging my fists, heart pounding, tears streaming.She was dead and it was all my fault. The whooshing sound in my head was drowning out my mother...I had to get away.

The clarity...   [Read more...]

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the heavy chains of flesh

by bespectakate – 11 months ago

It was the fall that surprised me most. Stumbling, suddenly in darkness, in a vile body that felt alien, so different, so limited, so odd - nothing to...before.

They never believed me, never believed what I said, when I tried to explain w...   [Read more...]

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The Fall

by PhoenixPhiire – about 1 year ago

It was the fall that surprised me the most.

I knew how it was supposed to feel. I'd been through it before. Gravity would pull me into the clutches of the wind as I silently watched you ascend the sky of my esteem, shining bright. I let everything rush...   [Read more...]

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Simulacra and Simulation

by JoFitz – over 1 year ago

It was the fall that surprised me the most. The fact that it took so long that I could actually be afraid of the action of falling. The wind was stinging my face and making my eyes water, I was screaming but the noise of the explosion had tak...   [Read more...]

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The Fall

by Tommy-Louise – over 1 year ago

I had never really considered how high your presence made me. It was just not one of the things that troubled me as I soared far above the clouds when I held your hand. What did it matter to me the distance from the ground that each of your kisses took me...   [Read more...]

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Falling

by PhoenixBailey – over 1 year ago

It was the fall that surprised me the most. The push I think I kind of expected. I knew there would be some repercussions of me speaking out of term the way I did. I knew that he would push me, I did not expect the fall.

It was that stomach rising to your...   [Read more...]

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1. It was the fall that surprised me the most.

by X-Himy – over 1 year ago

It was the fall that surprised me the most. Summer seemed to go on forever, endless heat and misery. When the leaves finally started changing, my eyes were still blinking out the sweat, trying to focus on the shimmering ...   [Read more...]

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Caught

by PatTheBat4MVP – over 1 year ago

It was the fall that surprised me the most.

I had been running, running so hard so fast that, when I finally stopped behind the closed fire door, I could feel my lungs burning from the cold air filling them with each harsh breath that I took. Placing a han...   [Read more...]

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