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The water was clear.
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November 15, 2010
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Do We Really?

by haihowzitgoin – 4 days ago

The water was clear and not a cloud was in the sky. Melody lay in the tall weeds near the lake under a weeping willow.
This was the last day of her summer vacation and as she was lounging there she was pondering all of the things she had done that summe...   [Read more...]

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Not "The Game" Now

by DoctorMikeReddy – 2 months ago

The water was clear. What? Sorry! The helicopter… the heli… ok?… can you hear me now?

No… I checked all the buildings… Personally. There's no sign… Yes, they're here now. Some are sweeping the island…

… the Coast guard were…er… surprised when...   [Read more...]

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Clear Water

by Discover27 – 5 months ago

The water was clear. Crystal clear, not so unlike the crystal ball the gypsy read my fate from. I just so wanted to jump in the water. To breathe. To drink. To laugh. To swim.
Ryan begged me not to jump, but I didn't listen...I couldn't. He controlled s...   [Read more...]

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The Lakehouse

by iylila – 10 months ago

Standing along the shoreline was different. I took a deep breath as the gentle breeze blow passed me. I couldn't believe that this was my new home. It was so different from the tall buildings of the city. The water danced along my feet as the tide came ...   [Read more...]

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Visions. (Or Lack Thereof)

by TyUnglebower – about 1 year ago

"The water was clear," he kept insisting.

We all had been there. There were pictures, and a video somewhere posted on youtube. The water had been far from clear. Anything but clear. It was thick almost to the point of gummy with c...   [Read more...]

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Water Child

by Jayden Nicole – over 1 year ago

The water was clear as she looked out over the bridge at the river flowing past her. It was as clear as the choice that she knew she had to make. She had to leave. She would not kill her baby. The child didn't deserve to be born to a father who didn't eve...   [Read more...]

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Darker Toward the Night

by mroshaugh – over 1 year ago

The water was clear and the sky, a burden. That clear, opening water annexed from infinity by the murky, swollen sky. Everything the sky held glared and grimaced like sweaty bustlers at a flea market.

And then I look back at the water and e...   [Read more...]

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27. The water was clear.

by X-Himy – over 2 years ago

The water was clear. "I cannot be stopped, I shall continue."

The stone was implacable. "I am stone, I have been here for millions of years, not some come by night dribble. And I shall not be moved.

But the water was cle...   [Read more...]

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Not a Drop To Drink

by darlingman1970 – over 2 years ago

The water was clear. The Captain held the glass aloft for the crew to see. So far, so good. The riotous lot seemed somewhat calmed by the sight. It was purely a temporary respite.

"Aye, for sure it *looks* clean," said one of the brav...   [Read more...]

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EndtotheBeginning

by kirkis – over 2 years ago

The water was clear. Wavy, but pleasant. The type of water you'd enjoy skipping rocks across. But this was not a time for horseplay. Nothing was in sight, nor had anything been in sight for the past 3 days. Floating, bobbing up and down in the middl...   [Read more...]

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