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The gate closed behind them.
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January 09, 2011
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by Anglea – 6 months ago

The gate closed behind them. That is what George wanted me to convey to his grieving son. I did not understand what this meant but it is part of the course of being a messenger for the dead. You don't really know the significance of what you are being told.
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Cold Chills on a Summer Night

by Alia Eryn Buffalohead – 7 months ago

It slamed shut, the gate. by itself. Or at least, it looked like nothing was there. But there was, a ghost maybe? The cold and chilling presence crept past them very slowly, they could feel it circling them. For the two men never believe...   [Read more...]

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A Second Chance

by Anglea – 10 months ago

The gate closed behind them. Back to the land of the living, no walking into the light without a backward glance.

Angels watched the reluctant men, women and children hesitate, clutching hands with their loved ones, those that had passed on before...   [Read more...]

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February Pain

by NYgirlLovesCA – 12 months ago

The gate closed behind them. It was a screen door, really. The three stairs led up to the kitchen; they stood and talked for a few minutes. His hand brushed her neck, in his ever-so-charming way. She wanted to believe him this time, that this time he wa...   [Read more...]

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Class Action

by CraigTowsley – over 1 year ago

The gate closed behind them with a soft click. They crept along the grass, still wet from the afternoon rain, to the french doors. No lights were lit on this side of the house.

They stopped at the door and reached for the knob.

"He was suppose...   [Read more...]

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Locked in

by Jayden Nicole – over 1 year ago

With a thundering bang, the gate closed behind them. They had not realized that they were being followed. Startled, the pair spun around. On the other side of the gate, a female figure stood, a heavy, elegant cloak draped about her shoulders, her dark hair ...   [Read more...]

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Hero

by nembow – over 1 year ago

The gate closed behind them.

'And stay out!' shouted the old man. He sneered and spat on the ground.

Billy spat back at him through the heavy iron uprights of the gate. A bubble of saliva struck his tie, but he didn't even flinch.

'Stupid old goat,' sna...   [Read more...]

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The House

by yangjanice – over 2 years ago

The gate closed behind them. No one knew what was in store for them. There was a collective sigh as people resignedly turned their heads this way and that, trying to get their bearings. All the panic and fear and questions had been exhausted on the two hour...   [Read more...]

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They

by theshoes76 – over 2 years ago

The gate closed behind them. The door opened in front of them. The ceiling opened above them. The floor opened beneath them. They all fell for what felt like hours, and when they landed, it wasn't with a concussive thump, but a soft, gentle bounce. They had...   [Read more...]

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Trapped

by dnmtwthlsrbm – over 2 years ago

The gate closed behind them. It was too late, she knew it. How did they get here? Why did it have to end this way?
"Jamie, it's okay. They won't find us here."
She wanted to believe him. She tried to believe him. She couldn't. They corner they ...   [Read more...]

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