"hey madeline sorry im late" amanda says apologetically. I look into her caramel coloured eyes, shes always been better than me even my parents preffered her. "oh it's fine" i say poison lacing my voice. Just you wait. I think. Just you wait till i can prove myself and everyone will finally prefer me. As i finish that thought an explosion sounds throughout the room. A sadistic smile forms on my face and a witch like cackle forms in my throat Amanda looks at me scared "whats going on madeline" she screams as fire starts to envelop the house. "ill finally be the best, the first choice, the favourite and my parents will finally prefer me to you. You've always been perfect" i continue as i walk out of the room "why coundnt that be me, why coundnt my parents understand". my walking turns into running as fire completely envelops the home. g=Guilt eats away at my heart but hate clouds my mind. "I did what needed to be done".

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Prompt (write a story including these elements)

hero A girl with caramel colored eyes
villain A traitor with a dark past
goal escape the chaos... before it's too late
Prompt suggested by Gone Awry

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