The Man Who Flew


by lisamarie20010 over 6 years ago

In 1921, he flew from the Great Rift Valley. No one believed him, of course. They knew a man could not simply spread his wings and fly. Because a man had no wings, and that was really the point of it. But he insisted he had done it. “Just because no one saw me,” he said, stretching his arms up to the sky, “Does not mean it didn’t happen.”

No one was convinced.

“I flew,” he continued, “From one side of the rift to the other. Over the canyon. I soared above the ground and floated in the sky.” He smiled at, they supposed, the dream. But he was really smiling at the memory.

One brave crowd member spoke up; “Show us, then,” she said. “Fly once more and show us.”

The man who had flown was startled. But pleased. He wouldn’t have suggested it himself, but since it had now been asked of him…

The crowd followed the man to the Great Rift Valley. They stood in a neat half circle by the edge and waited expectantly for him to do something. They waited for him to fail.

They man knew this.

He walked back a few feet and then took a run up. He jumped at the last moment, when a mis-step would have sent him over the edge and down, and he was flying. He was soaring and gliding. The crowed gasped, then cheered, still disbelieving but unable to reason why.

The man flew higher and higher, towards the sun, and then he was gone.

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Gone Awry over 6 years ago

OMG, loved it!

DazedPuckBunny over 6 years ago

What a lovely, dream-like story. I could actually imagine this as something animated.

TimSevenhuysen over 6 years ago

Great setup, but I would have liked to see a twist, or a denouement, or something a little more unexpected at the end. Right now the story basically reads, "The man claimed he could fly, and it turned out he actually could." Leaves me feeling there needs to be something else. What effect does his flying have on the people? Does he use it to do anything? How does he do it? You don't need to answer all the questions, but you do need to leave the reader with a stronger impression of some sort, I think.

Overall I still liked it, though. :)

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