Ararelucidness almost 13 years ago

Wow. A masterclass in how to capture emotion in a six minute crystal. It sums up so compleatly how I have been feeling lately. Thank you for writing it, and good luck with the novel.

Galen over 13 years ago

When I lived in New York I admired how casually my roommate approached beer. If he wanted one with dinner, he had one. Or with breakfast.

But when I finally reached the same point living in Korea, putting leftover beers into the fridge, I realized, if this is adulthood, two beers in the fridge is a small consolation.

You've captured that same emotion with your story. Sad, but well done. :) And welcome to Six Minute Story. We're glad you're here.

dnmtwthlsrbm over 13 years ago

Thanks :)
I actually wound up here because my friend and I have self-imposed weekly microfiction (≤150 word stories) deadlines, and I was drawing a blank. Google led me your way. I like the idea though, so I may stick around.

dnmtwthlsrbm almost 13 years ago

Thanks :)

Galen over 13 years ago

I hope you do return again, to write again. Do you post your writing challenges anywhere? I'd love to read them. (And your friend's as well.)

dnmtwthlsrbm over 13 years ago

The recent stuff hasn't been posted, no, but I do post some of my writing on scribophile.com and writing.com (same screen name). Also, I've just started work on my first novel. I have a lot of flash and micro fiction lying around though that I haven't gotten much feedback on (including the most recent stuff).