It was so stupid. Andrea had only been adopted 48 hours ago, and her new `dad` had already hit her. Her `siblings` got the same, as did her `mom`. One day, he got so amazingly angry that he pulled a 45. caliber on their mum. They barricaded themselves in their room. `What are we going to do. Mama`s dead, and dada says DEDAH! whenever we get near a phone. WE WANT OUT!` they whimpered. So they threw sheets out the window

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Gone Awry almost 14 years ago

Author here. Just to let you know: 1. Dedah is no in costigese, and 2. last sentence: and climbed to safety. But, what will they do now.

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45.caliber dedah mum adopted

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Prompt (write a story including these elements)

hero An abandoned child
villain An abusive father
goal Escape the family – alive
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