White bedsheets flapping in the heavy breeze. Orange shrapnel from withered branches impotently scrape the stiffening linens.

I never saw an owl in my backyard, nor a black cat elbowed and shrieking on my fence.

But I can smell the wet detritus of autumn by the cellar windows and drip, drip, dripping from the gutter.

The doorbell. A banging on the screen door. Shaving cream in the middle of the street. These things, too.

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Qner almost 15 years ago

"But I can smell the wet detritus of autumn by the cellar windows and drip, drip, dripping from the gutter."

There's a quiet moment of sense evoked here that reminds me of how I would have instinctively perceived the holiday as a child. Yet it's told from an adult's POV. Suddenly I want to celebrate Halloween!

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