It was the fall that surprised me the most. I mean, I knew from the first time I looked into his bright blue eyes that I loved him but after a few more meetings, I realized that I was falling in love. I guess I had always thought that it would just be "love at first sight" and that would be that. But it wasn't. I did love him from first sight - make no mistake of that - but with every meeting I had with him, every word we spoke, I fell more in love with him. I was truly falling. It felt like I was sinking deeper and deeper into a pool of water and welcomed the feeling of the water covering my whole body. That was what was happening. My love for him was totally and completely seeping into every corner of my heart and mind. And the image of his blue, blue eyes were still burned into my mind as I continued to fall. Deeper, and deeper, and deeper... in love.

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Jayden Nicole
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