Fourteen fish
bunched
like a silver
artichoke
They are traveling
farther
than their fathers
who never
left the river
Their futures
are
in lemons
and
bread crumbs
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Qner over 14 years ago
The artichoke image is great. Also, that their futures are in lemons and bread crumbs. Awesome.
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Veteran of the 90s zine revolution.
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Favorite authors include David Markson, Lydia Davis, Robertson Davies, Donald Barthelme and Richard Brautigan.
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kmh289 over 14 years ago
Ha! Really nice. I totally agree Qner - the juxtaposition of the "farther than their fathers" with "futures in lemons and bread crumbs" works so well.