"I never asked to be a hero," Fred screamed. "As a matter of fact, I was supposed to be the villain!" Fred grabbed Judy before Punch was able to stop him.

"Fred...what is your goal, what do you think you can accomplish by scaring Judy?" Punch asked calm as the dead wind that laid heavy against their skin.

"I want to obtain the Marionnettes. I want to be free to wake up and pull the strings of life without being looked at as someone who will save mankind," Fred said as he let go of Judy. His hands white with the anger; pain carelessly gripping his life by the neck. "I just want to be free."


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Prompt (write a story including these elements)

hero Fred
villain Punch or Judy
goal Obtain the Marionnettes
Prompt suggested by Galen


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