When I took Peter his final cup of coffee of the day knowing that tomorrow he'll be somewhere special instead of his smelly flat, I had a strong conviction that I had made the right decision, even though it was unlikely anyone else would understand. That's because they didn't have the knowledge I did. Secret. Life changing. Extraordinary.

In the morning we walked downstairs to the waiting car, Peter was chatting merrily unware his life was going to change forever.

Meanwhile I was perplexed why I couldn't open the door to my padded cell. Peter would be scared in the car on his own, or was I just dreaming again ........

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DoctorMikeReddy over 12 years ago

Do you think Peter will be ok?

Anglea (joined over 12 years ago)

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thriller fantasy psychological

Prompt

The day after tomorrow, this will all be over.
Prompt suggested by jadetine

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