I couldn't sleep with her next to me. I couldn't sleep anywhere as matter of fact. To watch someone become lost in their on ways and forget the ways of others. I decided to go for a walk just to clear my head. I come to the park see a bum sleeping under the funny pages. I decided to part ways with my jack. I feel the night's chilly embrace. I walk back home hoping I can forgive her betrayal. sigh


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jimbo over 9 years ago

I liked the line about being lost in one's own ways and forgetting the ways of another. And the detail of using the funny papers as a means of cover for sleep was great.

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I couldn't sleep with her next to me.
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