When I swam across the ocean to my new home, I never guessed that I would meet the man of my dreams, or all the hassle we would encounter. As a mermaid, I was promised at birth to the son of another wealthy family that lived like mine. Humans were off limit, although it did happen every now and again, and caused terrrible rifts within the community.

Jack was so handsome, striking green eyes just like mine and long wavy hair. First saw him fishing at the pier when my hair got tangled in his line. What a surprise he had as he fell into the water after I pulled very hard to get myself free.

I saw him daily, kissing, caressing his soft skin. He loved me and wanted us to marry. It was possible, but I could never see my family ever again.

My sister said I ought to do it. I was unsure.

I made up my mind long ago and now as I'm sitting on the sofa with my feet up watching a mermaid movie, I realise I made a terrible mistake. The ache for my old life is soul destroying.

The last time Jack sees me I'm turning to wave under the light of the moon, my silvery fishtail shimmering as I duck and dive. I hope he forgives me.

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Anglea (joined almost 12 years ago)

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