"You can count me out." he crossed his arms and leaned against the Maserati in such a way that made Jill know not to cross him again. But, despite the little voice screaming at her in her head, she did anyway. "Oh, come on, Finn, nothing's going to happen. Don't be a chicken." His features darkened. "No. I'm not going in there, and there's nothing you can say that will make me." she groaned inwardly; for 19, the guy sure could whine. "She isn't that bad, Finn." she said, exhausted with this argument. "N.O." he spelled it out for her, like she knew he would. "W.H.Y." she spelled back. "Because I don't want to!" his answer for nearly everything. Finally, she'd had enough. She grabbed her brother's arm and yanked him into their great grandmother's house.


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Jimmie Cannibal over 11 years ago

Cute little story. Family sure can be a burden ;)

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