I'm fine

No really.

Really really!

I'm not being aggressive.

NO, I'm NOT!

I am NOT shouting.

I'm perfectly Ok. O… K…

I'm Fiiiiiinnnnneeee.

Yes

Yes

No, it's not…

No

NO!

Look. I'm fine, Oh…Kay! It's all good. Absolutely great.

Best ever. Brilliant. Bendi (bloody) gedig!

No, I'm not swearing now. That's Welsh.

No not the middle.

Yes, I know 'bloody' is a swear word. Oh God!

I am really, Really, REALLY Ok.

Yes.

Yes , really.

Yes, he was. I know that now


Ok… maybe I'm not…

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Jayden Nicole over 11 years ago

Thank you for writing this!! Honestly, I identified so strongly with this that I started crying. I just finished writing a 6MS to this end as well. Oh, thank you so much. You have no idea how deeply this has touched me.

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Jayden Nicole over 11 years ago

Thank you for writing this!! Honestly, I identified so strongly with this that I started crying. I just finished writing a 6MS to this end as well. Oh, thank you so much. You have no idea how deeply this has touched me.

DoctorMikeReddy almost 11 years ago

Sorry I didn't see your comment before :-(
Hope you're ok! I wasn't at the time…
But as they say:
"Time wounds all heels"

DoctorMikeReddy almost 11 years ago

This is available as audio as part of the November 2012 #audiomo
http://audioboo.fm/boos/1079266-audiomo-22nd-november-it-s-all-good-someone-special

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I do all sorts of things. Mostly badly. Mostly better than others. I tell stories. Occasionally, I lie.

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Prompt (write a story including these elements)

hero An intuitive, perceptive girl with an eye for detail
villain Someone who knows something about her that she doesn't
goal Find out what he knows, and make sense of it
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