You had me at 'ox bow lake'. But the time machine accidentally switched itself on and didn't stop until I was back in 2012 where I started. I spent months in regret afterwards, looking online at the black and white photos of you with the rest of your Native American tribe, uncomfortably posed for the camera. I could not mend the glitch in the machine, could never return to a life with you. Sometimes I spend time with your ancestors, I have made friends with little Jimmy, your great great great grandson. I can imagine that he could have been our offspring as I recognise a lot of myself in him.

Little Deer, I will never forget you. You made me whole. You filled the deep chasm in my heart. I treasure our precious time together.

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Anglea (joined over 9 years ago)

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