She had already been waiting for half an hour, her foot tap tap tapping its heel against the cold tiles. A quick glance up at the clock on the wall – an old, crotchety thing which spurted into life once every creaking minute – tells her nothing beyond the fact that she's more nervous mow that the last time she looked. He was supposed to be here; him, with his knowing smile and faux-nervous laugh. A small case sat by her side; it was battered and scuffed in only the way something truly loved can be, something that has been carried and pushed and pulled and dragged through airports and train stations. The case had never been to hospital before. It had seen nothing of wipe-clean bedding and powerful drugs. It didn't know what chemotherapy meant.

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Galen about 14 years ago

I like the personification of the case. It's a very sad story.

leon.mcdermott (joined about 14 years ago)

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Once, in Beijing, a young girl in a red gown huddled in a doorway.
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