He didn't think he was much of a cat person until he met Matilda. She's even worse at this cat-human hybrid lifestyle than I am, he thought. He laughed derisively. I've got to do something about my derisive laugh, he thought. And maybe start talking aloud.
Matilda was trying to scratch a sofa, and failing miserably. "She's got no claws, that's her problem," he said aloud. Matilda turned and glared. "Oops, I should not have said that aloud," he said aloud.
"Oink," said Matilda.
"No, no, it's meow. Cats say meow. Pigs say oink. We are not pigs." I had been lapping up a bowl of milk and it was dripping from my chin like fatty dew drops onto my cat costume.
"Last time I checked, cats don't speak English either, Mr. Smarty-Fluffs. I mean, meow." Matilda said. She had me there.
I decided to go back to drinking my milk and minding my own business. The only thing worse than a bad cat person is one whose

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Scraps over 13 years ago

Amazing. I don't know if you ran out of time at the end but it doesn't matter, you nailed it!

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