HI! This is a continum of the story: Collapse.
"Hello? This is 911, what is your emergency?" said the operator. "Hello? This is Hestan Gordio. I'm in the park and my friend Vive just collapsed into unconciousness. Please send medical help!" Hestan said into the phone. "OK, the ambulance will be there in a few minutes." said the operator before hanging up. 3 minutes later, the paramedics arrived and lifted Vive onto a stretcher. Hestan climbed into the ambulance and sat like a rock beside Vive the entire drive. When they got to the hospital, they ran her straight up to surgery. After three hours, they finally admitted her to the ICU.


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Gone Awry almost 10 years ago

Hi! Author here! Just to let you know, i will be continuing this story in other pages! My six minutes each will enclose a portion of the story. If you liked "Collapse" and "Collapse 2" just you wait until "Collapse 3!"

Gone Awry almost 10 years ago

Author's note: Collapse 4 coming soon!

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