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"Hello? This is 911, what is your emergency?" said the operator. "Hello? This is Hestan Gordio. I'm in the park and my friend Vive just collapsed into unconciousness. Please send medical help!" Hestan said into the phone. "OK, the ambulance will be there in a few minutes." said the operator before hanging up. 3 minutes later, the paramedics arrived and lifted Vive onto a stretcher. Hestan climbed into the ambulance and sat like a rock beside Vive the entire drive. When they got to the hospital, they ran her straight up to surgery. After three hours, they finally admitted her to the ICU.
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Gone Awry over 15 years ago
Hi! Author here! Just to let you know, i will be continuing this story in other pages! My six minutes each will enclose a portion of the story. If you liked "Collapse" and "Collapse 2" just you wait until "Collapse 3!"
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I have been many places, seen many things, been many things as well, but what I shall never stop being, is a writer, a traveler of dreams and the human soul. My name is none of your concern. Call me anything or nothing; I may not answer to anything, or answer to everything.
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Gone Awry over 15 years ago
Author's note: Collapse 4 coming soon!