I held it at arm's length. The would seemed to shake as I looked over the orb. My thoughts started to take a turn for the worse. I invision the sky grew dark and I alone in a vast ocean the orb was what I think was the sun storm clouds started to gather and the sea became rougher, I held the orb there still at arms length, then without warning the world went dark and the noise of the waves left me to be alone still with the orb.


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Galen over 11 years ago

Beautiful stream-of-consciousness.

Gone Awry over 11 years ago

Loved it!

Galen over 11 years ago

Oh and welcome to Six Minute Story. :)

b23cml over 11 years ago

Thanks to both of you.

Gone Awry over 11 years ago

Your welcome. i certainly hope you keep writing. You give the story writing thing a certain flair that i've never seen before. Very original, and very satisfying. keep it up!

b23cml (joined over 11 years ago)

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