"Well, if you don't feel like telling me her name, at least tell me what she looks like."
She's perfect. Skin as unblemished as the first snow fall, dark blue eyes that always dance when she sees me, brown hair that shines in the moonlight when we meet in the garden behind her house. Her voice is smooth, young, and playful and I love her. But if they knew who she was... Who knows what they'd do if they knew that the one I love is a Capulet? I'm Romeo, for goodness sake! The son of Lord Montague, enemy of the Capulets. But, I don't understand how such beauty can be our enemy. Benevolio still thinks I love that wench Rosaline. Ha! No, no one can compare to my Juliet.
"She's... she's pretty."

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Gone Awry about 12 years ago

awww... way to take shakespeare and turn it into something yours! High five!

Gone Awry about 12 years ago

awww... way to take shakespeare and turn it into something yours! High five!

Jayden Nicole (joined over 12 years ago)

I have a passion for art and an overactive imagination.

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