That movie was so straight forward, The doctor was the hero and everything just fell into line.

I know

I like a little twist I mean it's just not entertaining otherwise

Yep

Look you want to stop off somewhere for a drink or..

Or?

She shoved her hands in the pocket of her hoodie and turned toward the alley.

It's been years she thought, probably best to leave all that in the past. Still a twist, something exciting. She moved further into the dark cramped space between the buildings.Not looking back, knowing he would follow.

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kmh289 almost 12 years ago

This story made me "hmmm". I liked what you left unsaid, telling us just enough.

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Prompt (write a story including these elements)

hero Doctor
villain Metastasis
goal Out, damn tumor, out!
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