What would happen if I just left in the middle of the night?
He wouldn't remember you when he got older.
A price would need to be paid, but I don't know about him completely forgetting.
Personally, I think you should go.

He loped into the night, thinking and rubbing his too soft hands face, never quite sure if he had been slapped in the face.

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MitchRudeen over 14 years ago

oop that last line should just read "too soft hands" not "too soft hands face" Stupid time constraints ;)

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