"So you're saying you didn't see Willie Mason leaving the store Friday night?" PI Dot Post eyed the man sitting in her passenger seat.
"I see no man, no ma'am. Course you know dat."
"What's that supposed to mean?"
"I see someone leave that store, 'bout 11:45, I reckon, but weren't no Willie Mason. Nah, dis person got curly red hair an' wear army boots."
Dot glanced down at her own foot attire, her hand reaching uncertainly for her auburn curls.
"Aye, I see you, detective lady." He grinned maliciously. "I see you wit' de blood on your hands."
Well, that explains the blackout, Dot thought as she pulled the silencer equipped gun from her pocket.
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Galen over 13 years ago
Oh geez. Rip-roaring intrigues and visceral imagery at a go. Well done. Great first Six Minute Story. Welcome!