Charles looked at the man across from him, poor man john, he had all the reason in the world to do it—homeless, no job, no family—he needed the money.
"Face it, John, we know you did it."
"No," John said, sweat beading on his brow, "I didn't, that old lady just can't admit she doesn't know where she put those Bonds."
"We have you on a security camera, you took the Bonds out of her car while she ate at the restaurant." Detective Cahrles said, "Where are they?"
"In the barn on timplton's property."

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ganymeder over 13 years ago

He broke so easily. I was hoping he was innocent! Poor guy.

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Prompt (write a story including these elements)

hero Detective Charles
villain Poor Man John
goal Find the Stolen Bonds
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