quiet by MitchRudeen
Sometimes you look kinda creepy when you are happy
Really?
sorry
I mean it is an odd thing to say but well I guess it is what it is, I don't feel creepy
No, no I, I don't know why I said it
It's OK
Yeah, I'm just weird tonight. Everyone is gone and it just me and you..
and?
And? And nothing it is just that you know me and you we never really hung out you know? And I don't know why I keep talking
Look, lets play a game - I will look not creepy and you will be quiet for like 5 minutes
OK
OK, go
Comments
MitchRudeen about 13 years ago
Thanks Catherine, dialogue is generally a weak spot for me so I guess this shows the power of not thinking and just writing
JessWest about 13 years ago
Great dialogue practice, Mitch. This was a conversation that could have actually happened, it's that realistic.
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CatherineRussell about 13 years ago
Ha! That's one way to get'em to stop talking!
Nice dialogue!