quiet by MitchRudeen

Sometimes you look kinda creepy when you are happy

Really?

sorry

I mean it is an odd thing to say but well I guess it is what it is, I don't feel creepy

No, no I, I don't know why I said it

It's OK

Yeah, I'm just weird tonight. Everyone is gone and it just me and you..

and?

And? And nothing it is just that you know me and you we never really hung out you know? And I don't know why I keep talking

Look, lets play a game - I will look not creepy and you will be quiet for like 5 minutes

OK

OK, go

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CatherineRussell over 11 years ago

Ha! That's one way to get'em to stop talking!

Nice dialogue!

MitchRudeen over 11 years ago

Thanks Catherine, dialogue is generally a weak spot for me so I guess this shows the power of not thinking and just writing

JessWest over 11 years ago

Great dialogue practice, Mitch. This was a conversation that could have actually happened, it's that realistic.

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