I saw it then, I see it now but somehow the access or more the feeling of ownership yes the feeling of ownership over the feeling has changed morphed become murky like I am seeing a man who was me thinking the thought but not remembering the thought myself

Orton stretched his arms and yawn smiled for a slight moment and then he pounced

Like the idea was implanted?

He stretched out this last word let it dangle in the dry air of the back office

Jim blinked, stared, coughed

Yes, yes just like just like that an implanted idea but how is that I mean if someone implanted...

He trailed off, Orton smiled and closed his ledger book with a satisfying poof of dust.


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MitchRudeen (joined almost 14 years ago)

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In hindsight, the solution was obvious.
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