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"I must protest!" she shouted, above the din of the room.

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"But this man is slandering me! I never did any of those things!"

"Miss, that's how court works. They tell their story, and you tell yours."

"But it's wrong!"

The prosecutor sighed. This was going to be a long...

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Daring to be noticed for the first time in her life, she pushed her chair back and stood up.
Prompt suggested by Galen
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September 11, 2010

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