Running, running from the people behind me. I don't have the time to look back. But I know they are after me. I flee along the soccer field once again. As I have done for so many days after school. There words are thrown at me , they hit me like the punch that knocks out the boxer. The though of boxer reminds me, I am not small any more, I have been running through this fields to training, to practice, to learn to fight back.
I turn around, I use my words to shield myself from there words, I know my way with words. They can not hurt me anymore , I am myself now. They can say what they want but I am free to be me. I don't care about them anymore.
I will never run again.
Comments
DazedPuckBunny almost 16 years ago
I liked this. Fierce kid! :) Great ending line.
SelahWrites almost 16 years ago
Virre, this is awesome! I know you well enough to substitute "their" for there and your ideas come across the page just fine. Well done!
RebeccaEmin almost 16 years ago
Aside from the their/there switch (which catches out a lot of English speaking people), your spelling is not horrible! I admire you for taking part and it's a fantastic story. Will be looking out for more...
I think I should start using this site again
English is NOT my native language, and yet I write in it. With all the mistakes that follows. Such as I write wrong on some of the more common words there and their. Shamefully as it is , I should know the difference.
The fact that my inspiration for quick stories mostly comes while tired do not help the spelling either.
virre almost 16 years ago
blame me not haveing English as a native language for the horrible spelling.