Running, running from the people behind me. I don't have the time to look back. But I know they are after me. I flee along the soccer field once again. As I have done for so many days after school. There words are thrown at me , they hit me like the punch that knocks out the boxer. The though of boxer reminds me, I am not small any more, I have been running through this fields to training, to practice, to learn to fight back.

I turn around, I use my words to shield myself from there words, I know my way with words. They can not hurt me anymore , I am myself now. They can say what they want but I am free to be me. I don't care about them anymore.

I will never run again.


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virre almost 12 years ago

blame me not haveing English as a native language for the horrible spelling.

DazedPuckBunny almost 12 years ago

I liked this. Fierce kid! :) Great ending line.

SelahWrites almost 12 years ago

Virre, this is awesome! I know you well enough to substitute "their" for there and your ideas come across the page just fine. Well done!

RebeccaEmin almost 12 years ago

Aside from the their/there switch (which catches out a lot of English speaking people), your spelling is not horrible! I admire you for taking part and it's a fantastic story. Will be looking out for more...

virre (joined almost 12 years ago)
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I think I should start using this site again

English is NOT my native language, and yet I write in it. With all the mistakes that follows. Such as I write wrong on some of the more common words there and their. Shamefully as it is , I should know the difference.

The fact that my inspiration for quick stories mostly comes while tired do not help the spelling either.

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