"That's right men, put up the flag. We are no longer the lone-star state, but the lone-star ship!" Captain Johnson bellowed in a frenzy.

The ship's red phone began to ring.

"No. No, we are not coming back from this tour - You can call us Pirates if you want to. No. We will not come back, we are tired of this war. We are tired of these living conditions. And most of all, my men are tired of this food. I will not listen to reason."

Captain Johnson was cut off by the distant rumbling of a torpedo cutting through the water and smashing through the hull of the ship.


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Galen over 13 years ago

Great first story! Welcome to Six Minute Story :)

JamieLauraChilds (joined over 13 years ago)

I am a high school English teacher. I also am a lecturer at a college.

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